Title: The Aristocrat

Director: Gregory Croteau

Starring: Jeff Gill, Adam Soule, Megahn Perry, Gary Henoch, Paxton Whitehead

An in-competition title at the ongoing 14th annual Dances With Films festival, ‘The Aristocrat’ tells the story of a traveling salesman who’s spending his final few weeks on the job breaking in his callow, cocksure replacement. A character-based small business drama that eventually morphs into a sort of low-fi back-stabbing thriller, the movie lacks the slickness, skill or psychological perspicacity to deliver on any of its twists or turns.

Set in the late 1980s, and shot on location in Massachusetts, ‘The Aristocrat’ centers on an aging salesman, Marc Ward (Jeff Gill), who seems worn down and resigned to the fact that he’s basically little more than a human catalogue. Former shoe salesman Eddie Kent (Adam Soule), however, is convinced that he can land big commissions in this new job, so he immediately starts applying his own brand of snake oil charm and pressure in the follow-up meetings on which Marc brings him along. This rubs a couple clients the wrong way, and also upsets things with a woman, Becca (Megahn Perry, an utter delight), with whom Marc has been carrying on a casual, months-long, quite chaste flirtation at a local diner. (This is of course begs the question of exactly what sort of traveling salesman decamps and works mainly one area for many weeks out of a six-month period, but nevermind.)

Eddie’s aggressive, chatty ways finally seemingly pay off with a big-fish client (Paxton Whitehead), and it’s not long before the pair run into an old acquaintance of Eddie’s, an enterprising antiques dealer named Charlie (Gary Henoch). While another job opportunity presents itself, Charlie’s work seems to interest Marc more than even the completion of the rest of his working days, setting the scene for a series of decisions with long-stretching ramifications.

At times, especially early on, ‘The Aristocrat’ feels like it could be partially based on some lost, early David Mamet manuscript, which is most assuredly a compliment. There’s a snap to the dialogue without it being ostentatious, and the grooves of generational conflict are nicely laid out, with small glances here and pinprick asides there. Other details seem yawningly under-developed though; Marc is supposedly a salesman in the semi-conductor business, but apart from one backdrop and some willfully vague chatter in a business meeting, this detail is completely unexploited, either literally or metaphorically. Marc and Eddie might as well be peddling Garden Weasels, for all it matters. More problematically, though, a general feeling of static constipation eventually gives way to a fumbling third act that is less narrative overreach than just bumbled execution.

After a jarring pivot point transition, director Gregory Croteau, working from a script co-written with Richard Stack, tries to dive back into specific scenes from the first hour of the film, showing them from a slightly different angle and perspective. The problem is that this tack — think of something like the end of ‘The Usual Suspects’, for shorthand’s sake — is effective in small strokes, for the punch of a big revelation, or in longer stretches that radically alter an audience’s understanding of the narrative. Here, there is essentially one twist, but Croteau and Stack play out the string in interminable fashion. If it were grittier, and the stakes and circumstances were muddier, this might be the sort of narrative sandbox that someone like Wayne Kramer could have a really interesting and fun time in. This isn’t that film, though. It fumbles away any possibility of moody intrigue.

Soule has a pinch of that too-cool-for-school vibe that Topher Grace works to such engaging effect when he’s trading in equal parts ingratiating glad-hander and insufferable asshole. And Perry, as previously mentioned, is fresh and engaging, breathing life into a character that could easily be nothing more than a cardboard cut-out.

In both the end credits and the film’s press notes, Croteau describes it as a mix tape, which is a good reference and descriptive tag, if also a bit of savvy self-defense. If you don’t like it, the implication seems to be, it’s because, well, this is just “indie rock” that’s not your scene, or you don’t understand. No, to the contrary, ‘The Aristocrat’ just ultimately isn’t very good or successful, in a manner unrelated to its obvious budgetary constraints. For more information, visit www.TheAristocratMovie.com.

Technical: C

Acting: B

Story: D

Overall: C-

Written by: Brent Simon

The Aristocrat
The Aristocrat

By Brent Simon

A graduate of the University of North Carolina at Chapel Hill, Brent Simon is a three-term president of LAFCA, a contributor to Screen International, Newsweek Japan, Magill's Cinema Annual, and many other outlets. He cannot abide a world without U2 and tacos.

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